Sentence redundancy
I was at the driving range the other night and this woman walked past with one of the staff.
She asked 'Do you hire clubs?'
'For the course or the driving range?' he replied
'Both' she said
'Yes'
That conversation went on at least two sentences too long.
She asked 'Do you hire clubs?'
'For the course or the driving range?' he replied
'Both' she said
'Yes'
That conversation went on at least two sentences too long.
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